All Comments on 'Cream Filled'

by anoche

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2inBris2inBrisabout 14 years ago
Well done

Believable, sexy, slow build to a nice climax with humour. I like.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Great build up!

Finally, someone who knows how to pace a story and writes without grammatical errors. Keep it wet mate!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Creampie

What about collecting some of that delicate nectar and adding it to the cream for the doughnuts! Mmmmmmm!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
fantastic sex

the sex (fucking) description was great- very detailed and drawn out so I had a lot to enjoy. Superb

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Creampie

Great story. I wished you had continued a little longer by having him eat her creampie, too!

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