by anoche
Believable, sexy, slow build to a nice climax with humour. I like.
Finally, someone who knows how to pace a story and writes without grammatical errors. Keep it wet mate!
What about collecting some of that delicate nectar and adding it to the cream for the doughnuts! Mmmmmmm!
the sex (fucking) description was great- very detailed and drawn out so I had a lot to enjoy. Superb
Great story. I wished you had continued a little longer by having him eat her creampie, too!