All Comments on 'Creampie Dessert Ch. 01'

Excellent, well written story. Thank you for sharing.

perfectly written. five stars

The only critique I can offer is remember the time. At the beginning you mentioned you met her 15 years ago, and your head was buried in your mobile phone. That isn't consistent with cell phones 15 years ago. A few of us had the Blackberry, but you didn't keep your head buried in it, it was primarily used for work email. I know, it is a stupid small point, but it took me off task. Otherwise, thank you for the story.

I loved the story and I hope you write.more. I love eating a creampie even more than making one.

Longgggg detailed introduction, took many paragraphs to get to the erotica of the story.

Wow, this was so erotic. I have had this fantasy for years and NEED to try it. Having the woman initiate this was HOT.

Well, this story nearly hit ALL of my turn-ons!

Lucky, lucky man.

Good premise.

But all the sex was too rushed.

Three stars.