All Comments on 'Creamy Island Ch. 21'

by AsheramL

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jmkuehnjmkuehnabout 6 years ago
Excellent

Another outstanding chapter. Have been loving this story all through. I am not sure that either of them would come back around that fast but I love where you are taking this. Only thing I would note is that of you plan to have them escape to write a realistic out. At this time I can't see how they could possibly escape. Please keep going

Cindy1001Cindy1001about 6 years ago
Turning point reached?

I consider this a cliff hanger, almost breathlessly waiting for the next episode.

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