All Comments on 'Creating an Addiction Pt. 01'

by dirty_geezer

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AnnetteBishopAnnetteBishopover 6 years ago
Can’t wait for more

Wow, great start. I can’t wait for next chapter xoxoxoxoxo Annette

smashithard25smashithard25about 6 years ago
Wow loved it.

I didn't get why everyone is giving negative comments. Its all a diffrent genre and the author is not here to write and win Booker prize. Take it as a erotic story and fap to it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Odd, a very high ranking story, that LW readers predominantly hate, . . .

and only two comments, both positive.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Like the concept, the writing is a bit heavy on exposition

Good concept, but exposition needs to be toned down. Could be more natural.

26thNC26thNCabout 5 years ago
Anothet

Another trash story on the mythical bbc. Just another fantasy for sick minds.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Great story

I love stuff like this and If I have a chance will “ help” addict her. So exciting to see her struggle to control what’s happening and see her weakening. Especially if someone’s able to keep you up on how she resists and loses. Till she gives up and lets them turn her.

1954Hall

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Put this black bullshit in IR where it belong, if even there.

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