All Comments on 'Creation's Guardian Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
like the plot!

didn't care for the whips and chains so much, but, that's just me. I look forward to the next chapter

OnyxShadowOnyxShadowover 9 years ago
Excellent story, great sex.

Story so good that I have no compulsion whatsoever to skip to "the action".

Just like anonymous, BDSM isn't really my thing, but it was tame enough that it wasn't a turn-off. I get the idea that this is sort of a variety series and BDSM was maybe just a feature of this episode.

With this many women in the mix, may I suggest one of them acquire a magical cock to use on the other two girls to assist the master with his "duties"? :-)

F1_FanF1_Fanover 9 years ago
Excellent Story

Can't wait for the next part!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Great plot

The plot makes me want to read further, but the sex is boring. Sorry, but it feels like 80 percent of the chapter are just sex scenes.

LupusDeiLupusDeiover 5 years ago

This was actually fun, much better than the first chapter. I skipped some of the sex tough.

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