All Comments on 'Creation's Guardian Ch. 10'

Now that was a lot more than I was expecting. I hope Bob and Cassandra know that Persephone was plotting stuff as well. You did a really great job on this chapter with the plot twist and development of the story. I look forward to the next chapter keep up the good work.

This is a great chapter and the series is amazing. Keep up the good work and keep it coming. Looking forward to the next chapter.

That keeps the story fresh and a good read. Thanks!

That was really good . Now we we need to find out what Stacy will say to her family and where will they be living

This has gotten really off track

Ignore silly mr virus I thought this chapter was really good just the same as all the rest have been as always I look forward to more of your brilliant chapters thank you

Chapter yet. I like the way Cassandra has come into her own as queen and has "backbone" to spare. She's probably my favorite character in this story line. Great job and keep them coming!!!

Well it sure started out as a busy day.

I think Persephony should be tossed into the underworld after she gives birth to punish her for her betrayal also. I was very disappointed that the gods turned on them like they did especially when they need every god they have right now they were already short handed now it's worse. if bob could fix these guys after connecting all their minds and making them think they have lived out hundreds of years of the punishment in their mind in only a few minutes or hours. they would get punished and then be made into better people and they would still have a full compliment of gods to take care of all the worlds they are gods of.