All Comments on 'Creative Rent'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
65%

I liked the story. A good first effort. Maybe have the guy start pushing her buttons and take control. hope to see more of your stories. I think you are only going to get better.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Highly Erotic

Please keep her acting the same way in the next chapters

and let her use him!

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