Crime & Punishment Pt. 03

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I swore to Laura that as soon as I was able I would restart the divorce. Even to me it sounded like so much wishful thinking. I had a good way to go. About four weeks after my release from the hospital Laura took me to see a new doctor. I had not had a regular physician. Elizabeth Harper was a family practitioner or at least that is what the sign said. She examined me and said I was making good progress and she complemented Nurse Donald Pleasant, Jr. for his efforts.

"Don is the best and you are doing fine Mr. Sullivan," Dr. Harper said, but mostly she spoke to Laura about what was needed.

Finally with a wink she said, "I think that you're ready to make your wife happy again."

I got the drift as Laura began to blush.

Laura was very affectionate all the way home, but I tried to keep her at a distance. It was difficult, I was horny as hell. I had been able to control my urges when I had been running a DA's office and trying to run for office, but now I had time to think of sex and no alone time between Don and Laura. I have said that I loved Laura. But I have not been entirely honest about Laura. She is not the classic beauty that Susan Singleton Fitzgerald is, but she has far more sexual attraction. I cannot explain it, but while Susan will turn every head in a room when she enters, for some reason Laura will make every man into a satyr. She has this appeal that goes directly to your libido. In actuality I am more immune that the average man, but when she wants to turn up the heat, I am helpless.

That night she appeared in my room in a silky black teddy, it had been nearly a year and I was not up to resisting. Moreover, she made it all about me. She started with a blow job strait from heaven. I frankly did not know she had that kind of talent. She is a woman who on the hottest day in July has hands so cold that you would believe she was made of ice. However, her vagina, cunt, pussy or whatever you want to call it is an oven. It clearly sucks all the heat from the rest of her body.

I had broken bones and was partially paralyzed but I had a fully functional cock. She had me tall and hard just walking into the room. She laughed as she slipped me into her cunt having brought me to the edge with her mouth.

"So are you going to hold out as usual? I think not, it's been too long. No forty minutes this time," she said. She was right she took me and just kept laughing.

"You know I love the way you come and just stay hard," she said continuing to ride me cowgirl. She kept fucking me until I came again. She seemed to be on a mission. After I came the third time I asked the question I had asked before. It seemed to have been a life time ago, that evening in Connecticut.

"Are we protected?" I asked.

Her laugh was deep and nearly hysterical.

"Why should I take precautions? I'm fucking my husband and I'm a junior, soon to be a senior partner, time to start a family," she said.

Three weeks later she showed me the test stick with its little blue plus sign.

"Sorry Pat, you lose, but then you really didn't think you would win did you?" Laura said.

But it was not over yet, there were more cards in play.

OK the protagonist is in a tough place. I intend to get him out so bear with me.

RG

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BstrdsUnOfJffrsUnBstrdsUnOfJffrsUn3 months ago

Ewww I hate the ending. Laura is SUPER toxic. If she loved pat so much she'd stop the manipulations.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

This story is pretty solid. Every time I think reconciliation is in the works, you hit us with another curve ball. Great job with the characters as well. You've managed to make them likeable as well as unlikable. You feel for the MC and condone his revenge, but he's constantly doing dumb shit and second guessing himself. Then you hate the wife, then you think her to be sincere and feel some sympathy, but then she does something as shitty as force a pregnancy. Nice touch. I do however, kind of hate how everyone's trying to bully him into reconciliation. Not the story part of it - setting it up like it's the whole world against him. I'm just saying it's easy to hate the characters that are doing so. Also a nice touch. Good job, mate.

Norseman123Norseman1234 months ago

Lost one star for his weakness 4****

EoRaptor013EoRaptor0138 months ago

To the anonymous commenter, three or four posts back: So, you think redemption and forgiveness should be removed from the world? In response, look up John 8:7, then look yourself in the mirror. The world could do with a lot more redemption and forgiveness and a lot less your hypocrisy.

EoRaptor013EoRaptor0138 months ago

I thought episode 1 had the makings of a good story but was so poorly edited ir was difficult to read. I was surprised, therefore, to find episode 2 substantially more readable. Unfortunately, episode 3 has fallen back to the level of episode 1. I have given three stars to each episode, so far, because there really is a good story hiding amongst all the run-on sentences, incorrect words, and questionable organization.

I don't know how an author on this site acquires the services of an editor like blackRandi, but I wish this author would look into it.

fullchoketubesfullchoketubes9 months ago

Fan-fucking-tastic writing. You are a gifted writer and story teller. Ignore the insects with their tiny complaints.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

That was a stupid deus ex machina in what had been a good story. I hate those cheap ploys.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Really didn't like this.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

In defense of genuine marriage.

I hate that the author thinks it's okay for wives to cheat on their husbands as long as they truly "love" them, and are repentant. It's repeated again and again in every story. In essence; "What you didn't know didn't hurt you." "It was just sex, I love you." Cheater's mantras. Fucking pathetic if you ask me. No, wives do not have an inherent right to fuck around on their husbands. The main point of marriage is that two become one, meaning the highest level of trust and fidelity is expected that is possible in human life. The betrayal of this means the end to the foundation of the marriage. The result is that the best that they can hope for in the future is fuck buddies. She'll get whatever strange she feels entitled to, and he gets the scraps. Not a genuine marriage.

I hated Susan's line about them being human for having a swap orgy. The implication is that all humans fuck around on their spouses. Yes, many do, but some humans have a higher standard and actually live by it. This is why people marry, because they are making a commitment to one person. It's not a temporary living arrangement, where partners are fluid. People who are faithful are just as human as those who are not. They have actually developed self control, and are not governed by the whims of their pussy or cock. They actually do love their spouse and realize the impact of any potential betrayal. In a sense, all marriages have a element of sacrifice. Each proper spouse is at minimum "sacrificing" all other potential intimate relationships that they could have enjoyed, and confining themselves to only one person.

CaptainbklCaptainbkl10 months ago

Good writing....poor wimp story

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

The Psychiatrist manipulated and kept manuevering Pat into believing that there was something wrong with his pride in order to convince him to let go of it so he would fall prey to Laura's psychopathy once again... at least it didn't work then... however, since he was too weak in his sexual needs and desires his pride fell and he lost... which was a real loss for the man and the story.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

You lied when you said that there were no cucks here.

B3ndoverB3ndover12 months ago

I don’t like the way it ended. She got everything she wanted. She cheated and he let her get her way in the end

NickTeeNickTee12 months ago

How sad. A great beginning slowly but surely devolves into a reconciliation. I know it's only a story but surely no sane man would reconcile with this whore to say nothing about the 'kindly uncle' Saul character... out to screw over the MC... I think that readers want to see guilty parties get what they deserve and stories that fail to deliver on that premise create disonance

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Good series, but it really started to go off the rails here. Judge ordered counseling AFTER she has already signed the agreement? The counseling so far away? And of course the completely unethical behavior of the counselor. Not to mention his responses to the counselor don't sound like a prosecutor. I see the author is trying to legitimize a reconciliation but it really fell flat here. Just really went off the rails.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Give us all a break with the "when she wants to turn up the heat, I am helpless" bullshit.

Nobody wants to make a baby with a whore. And that's what this cunt is. A whore.

She feels bad for being a whore that one time. But she was only a whore for the good of her family. She was the whore with a heart of gold.

She'll never be a whore again...until the next time what has to whore herself again for her career and family. And she'll feel bad for having to be a whore again. But she'll do it because being a whore is natural for a whore.

This is not who anyone procreates with.

I don't know which one of them is more pathetic.

The whore with zero ethics or the dumbass who let's her rape his baby into her diseased cunt.

It kind of makes you sick...even if it's just fiction...to think about a child brought into the world with these people as it's parents.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

and this is wher ei stop reading was a great story till you pussied out and oh she stopped the divorce and got pregnant. killed the story right there. sad another author i thought was gonan be good only to end up on the avoid their stories list.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Ok. I like this author. I like this series. It's actually one of my favorites. Read it a few years ago.

But I have to find fault at this point of the story. It falls apart.

"It would be a shame to throw away a chance at help because of pride," she said."

This is the start of the very first conversation they have in counseling.

The response written by the author is...inadequate. Glaringly so.

This is an attorney who got outmanuvered by his faithless wife's law firm. He has the agreement signed. To order counseling at that point is by the judge...is unusual to the point of being unethical.

His wife IS an attorney. She understood what she was signing.

The counseling is nonsense. And they are forcing him to give up half a work day to travel and have this ridiculous counseling.

His wife and her law firm are playing games. He just paid $100 to sit on a crowded train losing his work time going somewhere he does not want to go while his cheating wife plays into these games. His patience would be shot. His tolerance levels would be down to zero.

For her (the counselor) to immediately start talking about how this was partly his fault and he needs to be responsible for part of the breakdown of rhe marriage? Right off the bat?

This attorney is going to go into this seething a little bit. He's going to be unwilling to really participate. And he's going to lay the groundwork right off the bat about what he thinks about this circus. He's going to play the same game his bitch of an ex wife is playing. It's not about him being a Neanderthal or stubborn or anything. He is simply going to make it perfectly clear feom his first I traction with this idiotic counselor and his whore of a wife. "I don't want to be here. This is a waste of time. I'm not really going to contribute a whole lot. I'll be here but I have zero faith it's going to change a God damned thing."

How does he do that? Easily. She lobbed a softball right at the beginning with her statement above.

This guy wouldn't have meekly just rolled with it all.

He'd have established where he was at immediately to both of these women and said something like-

"Well...when your wife decides she's gonna fuck her boss to get ahead...and turns into the corporate whore she has always been? Not even keeping it a secret amongst her colleagues...just to get a partnership? Hmmm...sleeping with a partner in order to get a promotion...betraying her marriage vows? That is the very definition of a corporate whore...making her husband a n unwilling laughingstock of a cuckold? Well...all that's left to that man is his pride. If he loses his pride? Then he has nothing. Because he certainly does not have an equal marriage partner any more now does he? Just a lying disrespectful cunt he used to married to and used to love."

I guarantee...he'd have something very close to that ready to say...especially if he's as good a trial lawyer as the author has painted him to be here.

That's how he'd start this dialogue off. That's how most men would respond. Eseentially when a wife publicly emasculated her husband...she has lost all respect for him...what's left to that man? His pride. You take that away? He's less than a man. End of discussion about "pride".

This therapist would be put on notice from the VERY first to stop talking about "pride" like it's a bad thing for a cheated on man to have.

Good God who actually buys that he isn't due a little pride in trying to reclaim some respect from a scheming deceitful cunt who slept her way to the top?

It's unacceptable. It's horrific behavior. It shows an incredible character flaw in someone. Yet here is a recognized therapist evidently trying to put equal responsibility for the end of a marriage onto him?

And he is just going to nod his head and suffer through this? I doubt it. Highly doubt it. He has all the righteous indignation on his side. He's a trial attorney. He thrives in arguing. In oral arguments. Winning point by point. He's not going to take being spoken to by this therapist like this when she's so obviously wrong.

Sorry. That's nonsense. It's not believeable.

He'd never allow himself to be spoke to in this manner. It's kind of a major flaw in the story at this point. The author starts to use the therapy as the basis for reconciliation...slowly...but to move it in that direction. And really...in real life...therapy only works if you have 2 people whole heartedly really wanting to reconcile.

These two really don't even have the basis of a good and equal relationship. Her sleeping around pretty much destroyed any trust.

And later in this story she morphs from competent alpha female attorney into a pretty pathetic figure who schemes and then can't even take care of her most basic human needs. It's kind of a wierd turn. And it starts here...with this lopsided nonsensical counseling sessions.

No way he doesn't tell this therapist to go fuck herself inside of the first 3 one on one sessions.

I'm calm and cold fish in my business face. 30 plus years of finance and sales. I don't react even when the place is burning down.

But if a counselor that I didn't care about...in therapy sessions I did not want to attend anyway...is relentless in his/her attacks upon me and my character? I have zero problem letting them experience my emotional side and telling them where they can take their opinions. When not laughing at their attempts to try and analyze me...I'd be prone to emotional outbursts telling him/her they could take their opinions about my pride and "shove them straight up your fat ass." Repeatedly. We'd get no where fast. And thus would end this ridiculous mandated counseling.

MoustacheSmugglerMoustacheSmugglerover 1 year ago

I was quite liking this story, but it got weirdly racial.

It's always distracting and a bit uncomfortable when stories go "and they were all black!"

Doubly disappointing for this one, because it's a genuinely good yarn.

Just let the baddies be the baddies, don't make it weird.

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