All Comments on 'Cristana the Cop's Very Bad Day'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Intense

Damn. Great story. Hella intense.

MrDonNottyMrDonNottyalmost 8 years ago

Very good story hope there's more to her

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
HOLY crap

Good god that is awesome story. Want MORE!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

nice story. Love the ending, and hope to see more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
How about a part 2

Wull6 there be a part 2 for this story?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
So hot!

This is one of my fantasies. I would love to be stripped naked in public, tied up, and taken by the crowd! I know you’ll think I’m a whore but I’d definitely like to try this and am now soaking wet at the thought. A girl can always dream, right?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Fabulous

My only complaint is that i would have loved it to be longer, I may write something in a similar style then have the cop go bad in exchange for the video being kept secret as long as she keeps the bad guys informed on police actions and is available to be used in a variety of sexual deviant ways xx

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

A Good start to a story, but what happens when the police show up? Is officer Juggs liked enough on the force for them to help her or has she a ball breaking bitch that the others will call everyone else. The John could come back and take her to a tattoo parlor to be tagged forever. Maybe she is put out on the corner to make some money for the crew.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I’m a female cop and this story made me wet. I can’t believe I’m getting off to fantasizing about this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

It's not that your ideas are bad. It's that you can't write. In story after story it's always the same. Commenters praising trash. That might be great for your ego, but it does nothing towards helping you become a better writer.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

This needs another chapter where the Ladies if the urban neighborhood get a chance to get some revenge on the busty cop. Gang Girls, Hookers, Street Toughs, and Arrogant Bitch's all get a shot at Officer Jugs

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Glad to have the chance to write my odd stories. What I write isn't mainstream but I enjoy writing them for those that enjoy them. I love feedback and to share ideas that I have for future stories. Please know that I do like to experiment, so some stories will be very differen...