Critical 20 Ch. 01

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She listened and acknowledged it, "Well, how soon can you get it ready?"

I pondered for a moment, "A day?"

She proposed the following after I answered, "Well, it's Friday now, so how about we do it on Sunday to give you a bit of time to prepare and let me study some more."

"I can do that," I nodded, "I'm mostly free for the time being so I'm game whenever."

She smiled, "Good. Then you have my sheet and stuff, I'll be going to watch something."

Dear God.

"Well, that... you go do that," I pointed at her and then the stairs up to the second floor.

Looking at all the stuff we had laid out, she hopped up and giggled slightly, looking pretty excited. Without a moment's notice, she took off towards the stairs and was bounding up to the second floor in several single bounds.

All right, well, that's like the only sort of cute thing I've ever seen her do. So good on her I guess.

I sighed, "Well... I guess this is a good thing, right?" I grumbled to myself.

I was pretty caught up with how pathetic it is that since I have no friends, I have to play aDungeons & Dragons campaign with my fuckingsister.

But honestly... I don't know, it might be fun. Who knows, right?

Who knows...

Hm.

To Be Continued in Chapter 2.

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Hey guys!

So it's been a while. Glad to be back. Have a weird and interesting story lined up for you guys in this one.

The other stories will be finished in time, but for now, I'd like to focus on Critical 20, so let's see where this goes.

Thanks so much,

3raser.

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

well the idea was good and i became clear why the MC war finding noone to play with... and after seven years i guess the story will never continue

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
GOOD START

HAVING READ THIS STORY AND YOUR NOTE AT THE END I AM REALLY LOOKING FORWARD TO THE SECOND PART OF THIS STORY. MUCH MORE PLEASE.

__brother____brother__over 7 years ago

Best story I've read in a while. 5/7 perfect score.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
warning

it is very likely this story will never be completed, this particular author has 3 other stories and all of them are basically dead, what happened was the started one, didnt finish, then another, didnt finish, then another, again didnt finish, will probably happen again here

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
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please write more of this story

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