All Comments on 'Cross Country Ch. 01'

I enjoyed reading ch.01, I think it is great. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

A good foundation for the characters and a good plot. I'm interested in how the author is going to bring him and his sister together.Thanks........Rich

I'm really looking forward to reading the rest of the story. I enjoy your writing style and think you have a natural talent for writing this type of story.

I like a proper build up with illustrative detail. GOOD STUFF!

nice start

I'm still on page one of this chapter but I have to ask. What does "yellywed" mean?

Alright I actually finished the chapter this time lol and it is pretty good so far. I'm excited to read the other chapters now.