All Comments on 'Crossing The Border'

Good story BUT you took so long to get to the good part that you need to do a chapter 2

to tell us what happened when they got home.

Good story. Would like to see it expanded into a series. Psychologically, I can not figure out what the mother wants to accomplish. I completely understand the shock she went through at the beginning of the story. Is she just trying out her son? Is she is trying out herself? To better under, I need to know the country she grew up in. Inreal life, I have not problem with mutually consensual incest. Therefore, I tend to over analyse the characters and their motives.

@happybrother - Yes, I realized later that I should have expanded the last scene. Will try and expand it.

Thank you for reading and appreciating it.

@Reddead61 @digdaddyrich and @Anonymous - Thank you very much for enjoying the story and sharing your views. Really appreciate it.

but he eventually got between his mother's legs.

Good story.

Thanks for the read.

That was perfect

The person above me is an idiot. Great story!

This was often on part with Boris and Natasha from the Rocky & Bullwinkle cartoons. "Went to kitchen, sat down, set glasses on wooden table." The only line missing was "Moose and squirrel."

If you're going to post on an english speaking forum, make sure it's readable by english speakers.