All Comments on 'Crossing the Line'

by Riley_G

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sweetallissweetallisabout 10 years ago

Really nicely written, hope you continue!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
more

Please more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

Really nice, but hopefully we will hear more, a lot more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
GREAT STORY

I want to hear MORE!!!

erotikpassionserotikpassionsalmost 10 years ago
Nice

...but would be really great if you finished this.

HornymarriedguyHornymarriedguyover 9 years ago

Have to continue the story. Good start.

Belle2327Belle2327over 8 years ago
Please more!

You have written this story really well and it really needs to be told completely. Please keep writing we all want to see where this ends up!

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