All Comments on 'Crossing the Line'

Just Mmmmmmmmmmmmm...that's all...what more do I need to say? *kiss*

Excellent Joey, well written and very hot

Wish it had lasted longer, like maybe getting his bum around your hard-on. Perhaps next chapter. Please write more, and I wish hetero writers could get it like you did.

Rudbi one.

Wish it had lasted longer, like maybe getting his bum around your hard-on. Perhaps next chapter. Please write more, and I wish hetero writers could get it like you did.

Rudbi one.

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Lizzy

*is very hot under the collar*

that's all i have to say about that! ^^

words escape me well done

Simply hot!

Like it, the blow job scene was very hot. I loved how you described the moments when he was just about to cum.

Very hot !

thankyou nothing like a bit on man on man action

W.G

Oh man, not only was that hot as fuck, I also enjoyed the style of your writing. Please write more! TY

Very hot description of a shower blow job, but totally unbelievable that the main character is unexperienced with male sex. Nobody does this well on a first try.