All Comments on 'Crossing the Line Ch. 02'

But it won't be the last. The second time will always be easier...as will the third, etc. Thanks for creating another mindless skank in LW. you must have thought there was room for one more, huh?

plenty of room for these stories as there are 25times more stories gloryfying cuckolding and/or wimpy husbands. What is needed here is a chapter 3 - Consequences!

Yep I agree with Trixi. At least it's not a willing cuck sicko husband story. Chapter 3 better be consequences or the whole reason for the tension was pointless. Well done so far!

The hot wife release. Obviously the threesome she and her husband had with another man is bearing lucious fruit for this married couple to enjoy. And for us to enjoy reading about. 5 *****

Almost all of the story is told by the narrator! Very little dialogue. It is difficult to get a reader 'into' characters whom they mainly meet through a stranger's account, instead of their own words!

Thanks for writing.

the 1 favorite and the low score