All Comments on 'Crossroads'

Stylistically, I liked this. You get into the emotions of the characters very well. However, it needs more development.

i wish I could weave words so well.

My feedback is, maybe I'm dense but I lost track of the subtle shifts of what was happening.

Does she know this home via her own eyes and experiences or through the lens of the word portraits he's painted?

Did they ever meet before?

So what? The story was well-written! It made the reader think and wonder about Katie's remembrances regarding her grandmother, an effective tool to bring the reader into the story.

I guess there could be a second chapter of explanation for this story!

Easily 5 stars from me!

If your first story, good start!

It seems some authors write a second chapter to further explain their first!

Burninglove