All Comments on 'Cruise Gets Wild for Couple'

I like wife sharing stories but this felt very cliched - yet another black man with a monstrous cock. And are there really so many women happy to be called slut and bitch by men they barely know? For some reason they seem to be very common on Literotica.

I accept that it's just a story/fantasy, but if if you find yourself thinking that this isn't very believable it does reduce the impact.

We have been on lots of cruises but yet to find two willing studs to take advantage of the wife. Enjoyed this story of seduction and pleasure. So it has left us in hope for next year's cruise.

I believe this was the first story of yours that I have read, but it certainly will not be the last. Perfect story length with erotic build-up along the way. Plan to share the story with my wife later and hoping she will want to go on a cruise. Great job!

Loved it great job

All this cruise is missing is a stray iceberg. Maybe Great can find us one.

This is the way wife sharing should be... husband and wife discuss it openly.. both agree to it and agree to both can stop it at any time... and wife didn't sneak off and fuck them behind hubby's back...hubby was there..enjoying.. and participating.. that's the way it should be...none of this cheating behind the back crap..nice job !!

Liked it a lot, but there was no need for Tyrell to be such an ass when he fucked her.

Hot story and imagery. My only consideration was the gratuitous use of "bitch" and "slut" when clearly she was neither. Robert and Tyler were lucky to have access to her fantastic, never-before shared body -- especially Robert after a long "dry" spell post-death of his wife. Her husband was lucky to see his fondest fantasies more than realized. Why denigrate her? Just sayin'....