All Comments on 'Cruisin' for Sex Pt. 03'

by kristendixon79

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darkdance69darkdance69over 9 years ago
I really liked this one

If they are true stories (and let's be honest, there is no way to verify it) they sound like some seriously hot times! I gave this chapter a 5 after rating the other two stories in the series a 4. This one had a lot more action and really ramped up the kink factor.

As a piece of constructive criticism Kristen I would suggest it would have been been better to combine both of the first two chapters into one. Neither one was really long, and doubling the action in a chapter would probably have helped out with the pacing.

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