All Comments on 'Cruising Ch. 01'

I think people would rather have known about the tranny opposed to ssbbw... just saying.

What an odd story. It is written as if it is based on actual events; and yet I can't imagine why anyone would bother recounting such a boring tale.

There is far more time spent on mundane(and unnecessary) details than there is on sex, plot, or character development. I don't know why I am supposed to care about the specifics of their flight, how hard it is to get a cab, or how inexpensive their meal was.

I also don't understand why you provided a warning in the foreword about readers being turned off by bbw/ssbbw's, but make no mention of the fact that the protagonist will be bottoming for a trans.