All Comments on 'Crush'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Eroticism as she should be wrote!!

A delightful example of erotic writing rather than the all too common quasi-porn of the wham-bang-thankyou-ma'am variety. Good writing acts as does good seduction. It slowly increases the tension. Hopefully there is much more of the same quality. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Good Build Up

Great story filled with alot of emotions and sexual tension slowly but surely released at the end of the story. Very delicate and sensitive read. I enjoyed!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
gorgeous

Seriously gorgeous storey

HTW2HTW2over 6 years ago
Thank you?

You end with “Thank you”? So friggin stupid.

PenKnave193PenKnave193over 4 years ago
Loved it!

Such a very sweet and tender story!

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Location: CT I've enjoyed reading the stories on this site and figure it's time to contribute some of my own stories as well. Since I'm not a good fiction writer, the stories will be based on personal experiences. Please feel free to submit comments on the stories, I welco...