All Comments on 'Crush'

Nice story. Pretty likeable characters and scenes...

Thanks for sharing your terrific story. If it so moves you, I hope you will consider continuing it.

Love the story and build up. Very well written and most enjoyable.

Will there be a continuation?

Like to read more. That spanking via belt was so hot. I live to serve women: the truly dominant gender! Five stars!

I have no interest in BDSM, but this was an erotic love story about the secret crush, "quiet and cherished," where both know of the magnetic attraction -- with a nice twist at the end. I look forward to reading more of your stories.

Really enjoyed it - be good for a continuation

Really enjoyed your story, very very erotic. I do hope you write further chapters of your submission to Hannah. I did get confused about Rob’s phone: how did he text you earlier in the day if She had his phone?

Absolutely one of the best femdom stories. Please add a follow up or start another story.

Loved the story. Hope you continue to write. Especially loved where he ate the crreampie. Nothing like a good creampie to bring a smile to your face.

Great story. Write more.

Nice ending.

Would have liked more femdom foreplay though. More playing with his cock and balls before getting down to the real action.

Terrific ending,

Wow!