All Comments on 'Cry Little Sister Ch. 01'

I loved it! Please update soon!

way to start a story. Cant wait for the next posting from you

And I squealed like a pig in the middle of May when I saw your post! So ecstatic! Jason's sister with Rory! CLASSIC! <3

So looking forward to updates.

you are now my new favorite author.

update as soon as possible, please and thank you!!!!!

@LillithArchivist, I second that! This is amazing!

after reading this story, i had to go read your first one. big surprise for me: it's a hockey story! lol i loved the first one, and I love this one. can't wait to see the next chapters and see what happens!

how wonderful these first two postings of yours are because we readers do!

Thank you..for the effort, the artistry, the background, the romance, the human element, the....everything.

More more more please! Can't wait for the rest! :)

Looking forward to more.

Don't stop here for crying out loud...keep going!!

This is wonderful! An amazing, sexy one-night stand and genuine chemistry between all the characters. I'm along for the ride. :)

It takes a lot of reading to find writers who put the story ahead of the sex, and even when this site is for sex, I love the writers who wrap the wet sticky sex into a story. I intend to read the rest of this series when time permits, but I HAD to tell you that this is good, really good.

Thanks for the work, and please keep it up!

Kevin

I have Casey's Valentine saved as a favorite and finally realized I hadn't checked back yet for more stories. This promises to be just as good if not better. YAY!

Rory is hot! I love that Jill is finding someone familiar though she doesn't know that yet. I am enjoying this story already. Can't wait to read the rest.

A most lovely tale.

Condom?

"better Nate than never." LOL

The lack of condom struck me too, but not enough to take me out of the moment. Looking forward to the rest.

Your stories are absolutely amazing! And the fact that it's hockey makes it all the better (hockey was more in "Casey's Valentine" but I'm sure in the next few it'll come into this one too).

If I was a woman in the army who spent the last 2 years in Iraq and I invited a man to my bed and he started telling me what to do and how to have sex ... I would have taken the bed clothes and garrotted the fucker with them and then kicked him out into hotel hallway naked. But I guess your fantasy is the strong but submissive type.

Last input to this story was May 2011 for Chapter 5. Assume either this author has died or is just another worthless bitch for leaving readers hanging after five chapters.

There's so much ntr that I think the author let the sister fuck the whole football team before coming crying to her brother...

Another unfinished story.

Rory was a wild aashole....is he the hockey player...

She was in the army yet here she is in bed with a threatening wild domineering asshole Rory