All Comments on 'Crystal Ch. 01'

What the title says.

Know what that other story you were talking about is, but I can speak about this one. Great potential for a series. Have to say it felt slightly rushed, especially towards the end. But, in not an author. I just read the stories. Keep up the good work.

It was well written but a little too short and light on detail other than that I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

I don't get how he gets reprimanded for having a relationship if he is also still a virgin...I also agree with the rushed comment but it still offers lots of options to become a good story! Well done!

He gets fired for a relationship with his boss, but is still a virgin? None of this makes much sense.

For anyone who has questions about Max's former relationship, they did not engage in any sexual actions. You could say they had just started out and were found out before they could get any further than that.

A bit lame with getting fired and ostracised for not having sex. Well written though so will read next chptr and hope the idea improves and becomes at least a little plausible.

A fun read for anyone who likes comic books. Multiple story arcs, solid back stories, action packed fights, oh yeah, and steamy sex scenes. I love it. Just finished chapter 18 and can’t wait for more.