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All Comments on 'Crystal Ch. 01'

by michaeldgorman

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Rad'lRad'labout 14 years ago
Great start -

I dunno what others will say but - I will say that I enjoyed the first chapter and will look forward to more of your work. Thanks. A minor quibble - that I almost forgot - the story needs just a little proofreading. Thanks again.

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