All Comments on 'Crystal Ch. 06'

by DarkMatter23

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BigDog167BigDog167almost 8 years ago
Meh!

Sorry but Max was interesting and added a human touch. Story is poorer without him.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Okay so Max is still alive that's good. Kind of got that idea from the person who saved those villagers in Brazil. Every hero or heroine have a lover or sex partner so that's good I would guess. The chapter being really short is a bummer but I think I know what you're next chapter might be like. Hopefully it just won't be so short.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Don't be too long without Max or the next chapter won't be worth reading.

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