All Comments on 'Crystal Clear Cruise'

Tell me this is a continued story. It can't end just yet. This lad has just experienced heaven. Don't let the poor fucker just melt into storywriter's oblivion. Please tell us that this woman will be his forever. something like her does not come along very often.

Loved the story, much, much, more please

Very well written and plenty of great erotic detail....can't wait for a sequel. Maybe of his wife being fucked by those guys and they rejoin in their room and get it on. Good Job!!

amazing, really enjoyed this! Only criticism might be that the flower/petal thing is slightly overdone. Other than that-Brilliant!

Good story, little to no suspense and it moved way to fast for me.