All Comments on 'Crystal Connection Ch. 01'

Loved the beginning of the story... Can't wait to see the rest... Imagine what two crystals can do?!?!?!?! Thanks.

From fantastic beginnings... Well, I can't wait to see what comes next!

thats not a good story for a first story. Its a good story all around! I really enjoyed it

Loved it, please give us another chapter. It sure has me hot for more.

And a connection it made....a first timer here maybe, but not as a writer....you are very descriptive, which is a must in a story. You leave your reader wanting more which is also important....Now you will have admirers and fans alike waiting for your next submission...Thank You Hon,

You made this lady a bit damp.

This is promising, but it needs editing. Writing in first person is fine, but it would work better in past tense than present. I look forward to seeing more chapters of this story, though. I'd love to know where the author is going with it.

Terrific start. Pity it appears to be abandoned.

That certainly left me wanting more, but most of all, what is the crystal?