All Comments on 'Crystal Drop'

Enjoyed hearing from a male perspective

Evocative and oh, so visual. It IS curious how the genders do have a fascination for what goes on in the mind and body of their counterparts in their own private moments.

I really enjoyed the way you used descriptive words that really got to the imagination part of this whole thing. The visuals you put into this makes the story somewhat come to life if you caught the pun. I was steadily becoming mezmorized and wet all at the same time while reading this; I was not disappointed. Perhaps I might write a story to respond to your wonderful journey to give you a females perspective. Who knows?

Expertly detailed, I loved it!