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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Please, may we have some more!

That was both hot and believeable - nice!

I saw only one glitch - in the paragraph in which the protagonist becomes fully seated there's a "d" where a "s" should be: "Unseen muscled clenched me, ..."

I would really love to see more of these characters, though I will be looking for anything you choose to share. Thanks!

crazycujocrazycujoabout 13 years ago
cubic haiku

you just brightened up my day. dilbert cartoons indeed! keep these two together. thanks......

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