by ktmccoll
That was both hot and believeable - nice!
I saw only one glitch - in the paragraph in which the protagonist becomes fully seated there's a "d" where a "s" should be: "Unseen muscled clenched me, ..."
I would really love to see more of these characters, though I will be looking for anything you choose to share. Thanks!
you just brightened up my day. dilbert cartoons indeed! keep these two together. thanks......