by SatinSlip
Edit, edit, edit. And then EDIT AGAIN. This story sucks. It’s just plain bad.
Absolutely, the worst piece of crap i have seen on literotica. Writer has an amazing imagination.
The writing isn't too awful bad, but your story line requires a special kind of taste to be enjoyable. I'd score this as, "Good writing of an awful story." 2 **
Not the worst. But not that good. Kind of sick really. One star.
Sick, and twisted, I like it. As for the writing itself, I'd like to see it more descriptive in terms of what the character's are seeing and feeling. With such a fast paced story, you really need draw out the action scenes and describe them as much as possible. Hope that helps.
son was a jerk and stupid. there was a pussy in the room and I wondered if he would ever fuck her.
A sequel to this hot story would be very fine. The mother and son could continue to fool the husband, could get into more kinky stuffs like cum salad dressing, and the son could find new whores to fuck in the family.
Ok it was bad enough about the son using his mom for sex on black mailing her but doing so his friends can do it as well is really disrespectful the son is definitely scum Im not going to say it was the worst I have read on here but it's definitely 1 of the worst it will be close either way and I have read a lot stories on here you need help it's been my experience that most stories on here is a fantasy the writer has I hope for your sake and others sake I hope this is not the case with you but I highly doubt so I'll say again you need serious help there is theripest out there that can help with these disrespectful and extremely sick fantasy you just have to seek the help you need
Bringing the friends in and the flat out disrespect he shows his mother and father was a story killer this is a incest story you should have left the friends out again you can cuck someone and not be so disrespectful about it and you should have let the mom take charge that is part of what makes a mom and son incest story worth reading is the mom being in the lead of that relationship