by SatinSlip
An honest woman in all aspects of her sex life. All families should experience such uninhibited love.
I liked the concept but the story would have been much better without all the spelling and grammatical errors. Please get an editor.
Great story, would like to see it continue. But as someone mentioned, you should get an editor to help
That was great!! Please add to this tale. It was very erotic and I loved it.
But the other commenter is right. There are a lot of grammatical and spelling errors. Please reread your story several times before posting or have someone else to catch those. It ruins the flow as your reading to have to stop and figure out what that word is supposed to be when its misspelled. Spell check doesn't always pick it up because sometimes the misspelling is an actual word. Just a bit of advise from someone who has posted 80 stories on this site.
Love when the mom has to clean up the daddy sperm coating her own daughter.
This is a wonderful tale of awaking and fulfillment for a woman and her family.
Oh that more of us could have such an experience.
These guys didn't work as family for me. Like actors of a family TV soap they sound like family but doesn't taste like. It's cold and functional. The story Is quite good though but might be better placed in BDSM.
her family's descent into depravity, led by her own naked hot body. Looking forward to son joining father on third party escapades with Mom and Dad, or maybe capturing and impregnating his own submissive.
I thought this story was very good.
I'm tempted to say surprisingly good, or unexpectedly good.
Felt like a few different genres mixed in. And the protagonist was very interesting with plenty of hot scenes.
If it wasn't so functionally complete, I would be asking for more.
Ah to heck with it, if you can do so without damaging what came first, . . . give us MORE!
That is almost every fetish I adore, wrapped up in one amazing story!!!!!! THANK YOU
Great story with lots of fetishes rolled into one. It’s well written and shows you don’t always need a great deal of detail to make a story hot. Well done.