by ellabee
I seldom read this category but I liked your others so decided to read this. I'm glad I did. It's another well-written and very erotic story. It was a turn-on without getting extreme. Good job!
Hey stupid a female is referred to as a coed not co-ed which is used for a mix of male-female.
Really liked it. Loved the writing and story. I hope you plan on adding another chapter to this!
Admittedly, some spelling and usage errors, but give the author a break! There is the beginning of an actual story line, plot, all of the other components of a literate discourse as well as sexually explicit content.
Not bad.
I was too busy getting turned on!
Fabulous story.