All Comments on 'Culra Bothy'

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I gave you a 5 vote for your story.

I enjoyed it immensely.

I love the spare terse writing style, and the unusual introduction to their sex. Very arousing. This needs a follow-up: you can't stop there!

My fingers and panties are very wet.

This story strikes me as an impressionist piece. We share the sensations of temperature, light and dark, of wetness and dry...and in the end these impressions add up to an interlude. The undercurrent, first of tension due to the blizzard and then the dare of Sandy's stipulation for using the bucket, provide the story's muscle tone.

Lovely prose, too.

Very deep, passionate and intense - articulates what I have always wanted in that I have always wanted a man to really take charge, without degrading me. As everyone agrees, you are a brilliant writer. Thank You!

It's a beauty, Scotsman. It's as lyrical as your Melanie stories. You've found your voice again, and what an enchanting one it is. I loved this.

The foundations: ice, snow, cold and wet. The sparks that crackle between them. The fire - always the fire blazing in the background. The cold outside; the warmth that builds between them. Her soaking wet pee filling the bucket; dries her with his wet tongue. Fire and ice. The poetry of this piece is exceptional. With a light and subtle touch, the sparks burst into flames. This is utterly exquisite.

and emailed me.

I've had several requests for a follow-up. Thinking about it...

Scotsman69

Are like looking at a beautiful painting. I can see each location perfectly. You have the ability to draw us in and feel the cold, and then their heat. Another wonderful story, scotsman.

Not my fetish, but so well written, who cares?