All Comments on 'Cultural Diffusion Ch. 05'
by CoCoNiy101
- 23 Comments
kelleigh0127almost 12 years agoFor one you know you love that man and would probably have his baby if it wasn't for this 3 month plan. I know hell is about to rain down in the next chapter. He's going to pull away from her and put distance between the kids and her also. I know any passionate male and female in this situation would. SMDH Can't wait Til the next chapter.
StaggeredHeartsalmost 12 years agoI think Kat messed up big time how are you gonna say you love his kids but then lie about not loving him, I hope Alejandro finds out she lied in his face.
emj417almost 12 years agoKat has no one to blame but herself when he pulls away--leaving the door open for Luis. Luis needs to watch out, too, bc only her job and life back in the States matter--in her mind.
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoI enjoyed the little exchange with Luis and Alejandro. That's what I am talking about. Now she says she doesn't love him, there is going to be tension between them. More please.
Ashlee1996almost 12 years agoOMG lol why would you end it like that?! I'm on the edge of my seat right now hehe I really hope Kat comes to her senses and tells him the truth before she misses out big time. Can't wait until the next installment! :D
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoCan you make Alejandro get a frigen haircut please cause that long ass hair is just ruining the sexual experience. I mean don't get me wrong the story is great but that hair....oh lord...
islandqtalmost 12 years agoI am so addicted to this story but I have to say I don't know if I'm feeling the sex scenes. Their lovemaking always seems so fast and hurried. Would be nice for them to have a slower session at some point. I agree about giving Alejandro a haircut lol! Something about how I'm picturing him is waaaay too cheesy. Speaking of which, he seems to like his hair long and though he's a grown ass man is he in any position to accuse Kat of spoiling his kids because she recognizes the trauma of having your hair cut against your will? And I can't believe he has a nerve to pull the "I'm their Father" bullshit after she's been taking care of them non-stop. How dare he side with his ex-woman who does NOTHING for them!!! This is however very realistic. These relationships are always like that. They start off well and hot but as the time for her to leave nears things have gotten very tense and unsure and will probably get ugly. Can't wait for the next part.
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoI don't get the obsession with Antonio's hair. The kids being into hair makes sense but it's kind of a weird theme in the story.
Tiffybsweetiealmost 12 years agoGreat chapter! I think Carmen is jealous of the attention that the children shower on Kat. Also I wonder if Alejandro would purposefully get Kat pregnant in order to keep her with him. I'm not so sure that those were morning after pills lol. Kat loves Alejandro she just doesn't want to have to getting attached then having to say goodbye.
Keep up the good work and I look forward to the next chapter!
Vgheatalmost 12 years agoHURRYYYY UP BRING THE NEXT CHAPTER ON!!!!!!:-)
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoGood work so far...but Kat shoulda said, I CAN'T love you.. Since that is the truth but leaves room for her to reveal her true feelings...Saying she doesn't, really makes things problematic unless he sees she's lying...Alejandro seems to be getting a bit aggressive too. More gentle/sweet next chapter? :)
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoPlease DO NOT cut Alejandro's hair!! It is one of the sexiest things about him!!!!!
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoYou can/should make this story as long as possible !!!!!!!
Madameblaqueover 11 years agoKat really messed up. Interested to see what happens next. Great story.
Anonymousover 11 years agoWhy, for the love of God, is she a sexually active adult and not on birth control? What the hell?! She is acting like an irresponsible teenager. I'm pretty sure she can find condoms somewhere.
london101about 11 years agoLol. I would've told him "yes, i do love you! Lets have little curly/nappy black/Brazilian/Spanish kids. Lets be the the Brady bunch Novella style!"
Just saying. ;)
trubblemakurabout 11 years agoNeither one of them were being responsible adults? it's not just up to her to use birth control he should be stocked with condoms. Why does everyone think that pulling out before cumming is full proof protection?
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