All Comments on 'Cumming On To Big Brother'

Love gangbang scenes as much or more than the next guy, but why have the brother there in that capacity?!?!? Like that??? The point of incest... fuck it, why bother.

worst fuckin story i have seen in a week.take out the sibling thing and just have her be a gangbang slut and put this in the group section so didnt have to even start reading this crap

for one, what brother would agree to let 6 mates to cum on sister and if he was a sick as her and agree to help,why did he have to tell them it was his sister ?

would of made a little more sense it he said he found a girl who wants that experience

also she said her friend and her discussed it and wanted to do it together but she wanted to experience it by herself first WHY

would of made more a little more sense if she asked brother to help both of them have the experience

if her reason was to fuck her brother I'm sure all she had to do was ask

the premise of story was good it was just how it was written that made no sense

To the ones who commented ' why would a brother let six of his friends fuck his sister? ' and was insulting the story, does it matter? It was a story made for pleasure , it wasn't written to be crazy realistic so take the nasty comments somewhere else please.

This was a story about sex without eroticism, passion or imagination. Your postscript suggests you are a spoiled brat who can't take criticism. A waste of my time...

Hope you are going to do more with this story. It had some good points but was more a group sex thing . Maybe you can do more with the brother and sister and get hot mom in on the action . Don't take bad comments to hard use them to do better .You are a good writer show them ....

It was a good story

I for one agree, if u have mean comments to say, just shut the fuck up. No one needs to hear they did a bad job. And to be honest, it wasn't even a bad story! I loved it. And it did serve for my entertainment usage that's for damn sure. I would like to see more!

THIS WAS FUCKING HOT AS HELL....WISH I HAD A SISTER LIKE THIS THAT WOULD LET ME AND SIX OF MY FRIENDS CUM ALL OVER HER LIKE THIS.....KEEP THE HOT STORIES COMING...WANT TO READ MORE...TY

One of the silliest bits of sex fantasy I've ever read. Waste of time for both writer and readers.

I liked it alot. Need to get mom evolved, and make it a family thing. Great story!

It made me cum.

That was amazing I came so hard I've always had a fantasy of being covered in cum and full of cum then being fucked by my hot brother unfortunately he doesn't exist this was absolutely perfect really helped my fantasy thank you

That made me cum buckets, i love to jack off

for any lady and if it was my sister i would be in

heaven......

Well fuck.. it's a real shame I don't have a brother

Don't care for whore stories.

I have read hundreds or more stories like this and many other topics, I find your writing is very good, descriptions and actions are important to readers and you made this story a "10". Sister / Brother stories like this are really arousing and great if written well like yours. I hope that Beth and Dale back home in private decide they want to take care of each other sexually from now on. Dale has a big thick cock and big balls plus a big cum load for his horny sister and she has a beautiful body and a hot pussy that likes his cock and cum. I sure hope you write a second story where Beth invites him to come bang her silly while Mom is away and that they develop a hot sexual relationship and explore many hot encounters together. Thanks again and cannot wait for morw.

I thought this story was very good and descriptive. I would like reading more of your works.

That was really great! Got me really revved up! Thanks!