by Bellie444
This is a clever submission for the Valentine’s Day contest as it actually encompasses Cupid as the central character and his screwed up efforts at match making. A few of the others merely bolt on the date as an off hand comment. Cupid’s repairs to his screwed up matches makes for some enjoyable travel and rework as he and Psyche work to put things right. An appropriate HEA for Cupid and Psyche. Who knew even deities celebrate events and holidays by sending flowers. This was fun to read. Good luck with the contest.
Cupid and Psyche was my favorite myth growing up. The young woman, fucking her unseen husband, fearing him monster only to find him the most gorgeous of the gods. It pushed all my buttons. And this was a worthy sequel.
5 stars. Well written, lighthearted but still super sexy. You are a great writer my dear!
All the stars, hot, hot, hot and full of play. I liked Zeus and Hera very much. And the crossbow. A very fun, sexy Valentine’s tale, I loved it.
because its written by Bellie444! I hadnt even noticed the author title until the end of the story so it was a pleasant confirmation that i love your work.
This was a really cute story! I liked the premise and the multiple couples offering different scenes and games. I hope youre submitting this for a competition because you deserve to win a valentines themed one with this. I love the way you used the halo the best of any element in this story. Very imaginative and fun!
As always, I am blown away. So much detail within one story. Thank you for taking to time to write this theme. What a Valentines gift for us!
I always thought Cupid was small, kind of baby-like, and naked, with adorable little wings, and a mischievous smile? I like your rendition better! I've been fooled by portrayals of Western Art, that also typically shows Jesus as a white, European male, and not at all middle eastern. It took your creative originality to break the spell of my brainwashing! You missed a chance for some kink: Cupid could have morphed Psyche back in her Arudan princess form, for a sexy interracial fuck. A great tale, well done from start to finish, and like most everyone else, five stars from me! ~~ JB
I tend not to read long entries designed to tell a story rather than just get someone off. I'm glad I made the exception here. Great writing!
Eros/Cupid and Psyche has always been my most favorite Greek mythology story and couple. This was the best fan fiction of them I’ve read yet! Adding Pothos as the wedge in their relationship was quite unexpected. Thank you for this amazing read! I love happy endings!
Congratulations, Pretty. It’s a wonderful story and you deserve it. Well done.
GODD I NEED MORE OF HERA AND ZEUS'S STORY. all the mythologies I read painted the story of hera and Zeus really sadly but you make them look so cuddly and gushy I need more of that
This and the ox who got the cream your best works to date. Really enjoyed them.
Hey congratulations on winning the Valentine's Day contest! I am in awe of your talent! ~~ JB
thoroughly enjoyable fairytale yet I would think gods would be much more cruel and imaginative as a spanking not be much of a punishment.