All Comments on 'Cupid's Revenge'

Better Author - well done

A real unique little story :)

It sure would be nice if it were so. A very imaginative, fun read. Good luck in the contest.

Made me smile! Thanks!

Nice to read something clever and lighthearted with a beautiful message, makes you wish it could really happen.

Dream you're a darlin'. I enjoyed this thoroughly.

I missed this one. Very imaginative but of course I expect nothing less from you. Good luck!

I got a big kick out of this. Great concept, and funny too.

It worked on several different levels.

It had an interesting premise and for that reason alone deserves respect. It's just it's really begging for more expansion, more reality, more pain. A deeper look at the world, more pathos, more reason to hold the characters, something. It's a premise that deserves a longer story whebever you eventually come back to it.

Still, quite enjoyable.

Valentine's pleeease. Loved it, a touch of MASH and a heap of laughs - great stuff DP. My only regret is we didn't get love potion nummer 9, or have I been hanging round those old record shops too long.

Nicely done.

Extraordinarly inventive - you deserve a prize for that alone.