by Chimera44
Dear readers: Thank you for your patience. I know new chapters have been slow in coming. Sometimes reality supersedes fiction! A new Jessa chapter should post early next week, and Sky's next chapter a little later next week.
Thanks for a great read. Your plot is very well planned and reads smoothly.
Wow I actually checked your author page yesterday to see if a new chapter was posted, thank you for posting one! This was a very surprising turn of events, you are doing a great job of dragging me into your story. Looking forward to the next chapter, thank you for having it ready so soon!
First of your stories that I've read, but am now eager to delve into the others. Was disappointed to realize that Ch. 3 was only published today and am eagerly awaiting the next installment. You are a talented writer, thank you for sharing your gift with us unwashed masses.
Erica's backstory is par-non the most fucked up and sad thing I have read on this site. That's not a jab against your writing which is superb but god damn did you go dark with this one.
As I was reading the first half of this chapter, and seeing all the character interaction and consequences of Eric's setback with Erica, I was impressed. Not just by the characters and dialogue, which were superb, but by the fact that the author was willing to have a character *fail* in a significant manner. Significant enough that it took a lot of work to recover from. Few authors are able to explore failure in a way that is believable. The character interactions throughout this chapter were a true pleasure to read.
I also enjoyed the latter half of the chapter. Erica's past is slowly revealed throughout the chapter, and the hints grow darker until the end. The final scene was a great reveal. I'm really looking forward to see how the story develops.
Truly captured by this turn of events in a very unique story