by kamalw1
The grammar errors were a little distracting. It's a minor thing, but it seemed odd at the beginning of the story there was time for Issie and his Dad would have time to say good bye but his Mom never said her farewells.
I love reading comments from other readers on how they hate pregnancies in stories like this. Reminded that this is fiction, I kind of like these ‘intimate family moments!’
Keep it going!
M