All Comments on 'Curious Girls Ch. 28-29'

I enjoyed the amnesia plot but it just felt lacking what made this the best story on literotica, I'm very happy to see Sara remember everything Tamara did to her. The squirting was very unexpected but very satisfying too. Keep it up

This one started with a classic confused Sara pushing away her issues by not talking and having lesbian sex instead. The whole "amnesiac straight girl confused into being a lesbian" aspect is deliciously twisted.

And then it all escalated, finishing in this grandiose showdown. I criticized the previous chapter for skipping the sexy times, but boy did you go the other way in this one. And I loved every second of it. Missing Krista aside, you hit the nail on the head in this one - what happens on the last page is like everything that's great about this story concentrated into a single incredible scene. Both thumbs up, way, way up.

Now that Sara remembers Tamera being a bitch will she piss off Tamera to the point where she forces her shit down Sara's throat?

Woo finally!

As usual, really well done, love your writing and current direction of the story.

See you all in a few more months :P

That last page is what makes this story so good. Interesting to see how the relationship with Sara and Tamara unfolds in the next chapter following this realisation. Presumably Tamaras pretence when the 2 of them are alone will be gone but what about when they're out in public? Will the wedding still go ahead? Will Sara retry getting hold of Krista for help? If Sara struggles to get out of Tamaras grip how will Tamara punish her? Will Amber double team with Tamara in the future? I feel like the story has completely opened up again and am excited to see where it goes

Great work again, worth the wait!

Thanks for the double chapter :P, take the time you need.

Loved the last page the most haha.

Can't wait for the next one!

(Also would like to add my vote to the Scat scene!)

Greetings

Can you make amber fuck off. I don't want Sara being forced by Amber anymore, and I want This to sort of be a dream because I enjoyed Sara being with Tamara as a relationship. I think it's time Sara finally got something good and having her forget about the past so that she can be happy is good for her. Please let this part of her and Tamara be a dream and they live happily ever after? Please: and that should be how you end it. Cap it off at thirty and begin another masterpiece like this. I think Sara should marry and be happy with Tamara and that this should just be a nightmare chapter

I have a feeling something wild is going to happen story wise that will just be the worst for Sara (worse than anything yet lol). Like I can see her somehow getting in trouble with the police and being sentenced to house arrest with Tamara. Or something has to be there to restrain her from running away. Because seriously, after all the abuse she's received (and now she remembers), you'd think she'd start trying to protect herself more than her sister. I still want Tamara to face some repercussions, but I'm not hopeful

I'm hoping to see Sara submit to Tamara's next advance (even as she tells herself she's trying to fight) simply because she has come to enjoy licking Tamara's ass.

I actually like the role Amber plays. Someone pushing the boundaries even more. Keep it up!!

I am really glad you are continuing your amazing work. It is always worth the wait and at the end I am always really excited for the next chapter.

The way Tamara is so demanding even if she already receives some worship is great.

I hope you keep Sara trapped in the forced facesitting and pussy licking action. I am really thinking about what role Amber or Krista might play in the following chapters ;)

I get it this is literotica, everyone has their own fetishes, but for the love of god please do not bring eating shit into the story, that is so disgusting. Screw both of you guys for suggesting it, no just no. I've seen another great story before devolve into everyone shitting on each other. Please please please don't have them shit on each other. I purposely avoided watching the 2 girls 1 cup video, I don't want it reenacted in one of my favorite stories!

This chapter was amazing, little bit disappointed that tamara didn't use spitting/saliva on sarah but a great one nevertheless. Any updates on the next chapter?

Ten weeks have passed and

this part of the story currently has a rating of 4.92 !!!

I wait and long for a sequel! And I'm probably not the only one!

This story has captivated me for years. I translated every part into my mother tongue and read it over and over again.

Sara and Tamara are for me like old acquaintances. Tamara is the type of woman I've always admired. Strong, self-assured and dominant, and I hope she will be always superior to Sara. Physically as well as mentally.

Please precipiceofoblivion, tell us when the next part will be online. Just approximately. Let us know how long we have to wait!

Thousands of fans are waiting for a message from you!

A faithful, admiring reader!

Excuse my bad English!

3 months to the day exactly! Please give us at least a little information!

We wait longingly!

Kastanie, et al.

I appreciate the patience (and kind words). As always, I regret the delays. Unfortunately, big deadlines are upcoming at work, and it has been keeping me busy nights and weekends. I've also had family in town for nearly one of the last three months which took up the rest of any time I had free. So, long story short, I'm way behind on my writing. I did manage to get a decent amount of writing done last week, so I've got about half a chapter written. I'm hoping to get the rest finished next week. However, between delays, rewriting, cleaning up the chapter, etc, I anticipate at least another month before I'll be able to finish the chapter. However, I will try harder to find time to finish the chapter! Despite the fact I'm trying to end it, it's going to take a while at this rate. :-D

Thanks again for your patience!

I am glad to hear from you and thank you for your informing words! We now know how long we have to wait for the new chapter. Take your time. This story deserves it!

Take your time. :3

Thanks for keeping us updated.

Love the story!

When is next chapter coming?????

It's been 6 month but i'll wait

HELOOOOO?!

Any updates maybe? =D

It will not take too long, I think. One month has passed since the last update of the author. He wrote that it will take at least another month. So he'll get in touch soon and let us know.

We have to be patient. But that's hard, because this story is really addictive! It's the best erotic story I've ever read!

Have to agree with kastanie26 here, this story deserves all the time it gets. We just gotta wait :)

Im starting to think we are getting troll teased and there's no next part coming out

I feel the next chapter should of already been here by now.

4 months... What's going on, I really don't have much else to say lol my impatience is officially killing me now though

I have to apologize yet again, it seems. I completed the chapter, but after I finished I realized I wasn't satisfied. So I rewrote almost the entire thing. :-/ That was before I left the country for the last week, and I've only just now returned. I'm working hard to try to finish! However, those deadlines I mentioned before are almost here, and that means even weekends are busy right now. However, I expect (hope) that things should slow down at work soon and I'll have a bit more free time for writing.

I know it's been a long time, and I really will try to do better! I appreciate your continued patience and support! Since I'm trying to wrap up the story, I'm also finding it more difficult than usual to write because all of the details are starting to matter more to how the story ends.

I will continue to keep you updated on my progress! On that note, I bet you're asking yourself why I'm still writing this response when I should be working on the story. And that would be a good question. If you insist, I'll go back to work on it right this instant. ;-)

Until next time!

This story is sensational. I've fingered myself to so many orgasms over Tamara's domination of her poor little slut that I almost feel as if I'm Sara. You're a great writer. like everyone else I want more but thank you for what you've already delivered.

Really? Will the next chapter ever get posted?

I think it will come out for christmas. Fingers crossed. 29 chapters is pretty good going for free so lets not take anything for granted.

I just hope it continues with the pace it picked up in this last page

I think the author will definitely speak again soon. I also hope that the new part will be released before Christmas. But the author emphasizes again and again that he has a lot of work to do in real life...

I long to know how both girls will react now. What's Sara doing to get out of Tamara's clutches? Will Tamara try to bind Sara to herself with sexual violence? I'm incredibly curious!

Please, dear author, let's not wait too long!

Make us a fantastic Christmas present with the continuation of this wonderful story!

Charlotte87: Thank you for the kind words! Knowing you enjoy my writing so much is high praise indeed. :-)

kastanie26, Anonymous #22: A Christmas deadline, eh? You know what, I always work harder under deadlines, so let's see if we can make that happen!

As for the progress, the (new) draft is almost finished. I should be able to finish today and start cleanup. I think I'm much happier with my new draft, I just regret that it has taken so long to finish.

I get the deadline for it but as impatient as I am with these things, I would definitely prefer it be before christmas rather then on that day and I really hope sarahs sister gets some of Tamara now or maybe helps her. I've been wanting her to get involved ever since she threatened sarah about it.

Christmas is almost here, can we expect a new chapter as a present to open on Christmas morning? I hope so :)

Unfortunately, I'm afraid I won't be able to make my Christmas deadline. I've decided to re-write the chapter again. It should be done by February or March.

Just kidding. ;-)

I submitted chapter 30 for publication! With any luck, it will be available before Christmas. In my experience, it usually takes 48-72 hours before a chapter will be made public, but it can take longer if a submission is rejected for any reason. I've also seen it take longer around holidays, so I can't make any promises. However, it's out of my hands now, and I can finally start working on Chapter 31.

Happy holidays to everyone, and I hope the new year treats you all well!

Thank you for this wonderful information! I'm even more looking forward to Christmas now. Part 30 will be like an extra Christmas present for me.

The last part (28/29) have been released after almost 5 days. I hope it doesn't take that long. It would be December 27th. But I can wait that long! It doesn't matter on the few days anymore!

Thank you precipiceofoblivion for your efforts to keep the deadline. You beautify very many people their everyday life and now also the Christmas!

I wish you a happy Christmas and a healthy 2018!