All Comments on 'Curious Virgins'

by bigdoge

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Everyone starts slowly their first time

A fine first story. Write more and add more details as you refine your style. Enjoyed reading this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Grammar

Difference between yea and yeah. I think you're looking for yeah.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Great short story

Realistic and easy read. I like the small penis and breasts and how the characters accept each other.

bigdogebigdogeover 6 years agoAuthor
Thank you

Thank you! for your suggestions and support!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Excellent story

Good realistic story. Quite a few couples have been brought together by size compatibility. It is a type of understanding that bonds couples like Kevin and Haley both physically and emotionally.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Good Story

Your torn between making them innocent and knowledgeable.

Difficult to believe they could be in college and be so naïve.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Editing

Try to find someone with a good knowledge of spelling and grammar to help you refine your writing.

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