by bigdoge
A fine first story. Write more and add more details as you refine your style. Enjoyed reading this story.
Realistic and easy read. I like the small penis and breasts and how the characters accept each other.
Good realistic story. Quite a few couples have been brought together by size compatibility. It is a type of understanding that bonds couples like Kevin and Haley both physically and emotionally.
Your torn between making them innocent and knowledgeable.
Difficult to believe they could be in college and be so naïve.
Try to find someone with a good knowledge of spelling and grammar to help you refine your writing.