All Comments on 'Curtains Removed for Painting'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
The start of a very slipery slope.

I hope this female writer doesn't take this marriage into a Cuckold relationship.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Sounds Like A How To

Fuck up a marriage, that has been done about every other story, I'll skip the rest of this one.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Excellent Story!!!

My wife and I loved it! What happened next?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
great story

i hope de neighbour take that teasing woman

Tall_Drink63Tall_Drink63over 13 years ago
It was hard to believe...but!

Yeah, it seemed hard to believe that she would want to shower while she thought a nieghbor was watching but...who cares! It was fun to read! Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Reminded me of our story

I liked it. It reminded me of our first apartment. My husband liked to keep me naked when we were without company but he also liked our blinds a little open. I didn’t like it until after I got to know our neighbors but I would dress after he left for work and then be naked in time for him to get home. Our neighbors were mostly young and nice like us so after a while I grew to really like our blinds open a little when I was topless or my husband was home. I’m really shy most times but I have always loved ‘accidental’ exposure that keeps me innocent looking. Anyways, one day when I was doing laundry at our apartment laundry mat one of the very young mothers ‘Maria’ in my apartment saw me and told me that she and her husband walked up on some young men peeping on my bedroom window and if I didn’t want it to become a habit I needed to do something about it. I was surprised, upset, happy and embarrassed at the same time. I recovered and said I doubted they saw anything. ‘Maria’ said they saw me in my panties because she and her husband saw too. I was shocked and filled with mixed emotions. I guess she saw though me because her face changed expressions and then paused and said, that my secret was safe with her. I should have closed the blinds again and had a talk with my husband. Instead I got more daring just like Kim. Later I found out from ‘Maria’ that they were renting porn VHS tapes from video stores just to add short clips of themselves at the end. I then told my husband everything but made the 'me being seen' part sound brand new. My husband and I found them. All of their recordings were at the backs of amateur porn tapes and we started doing that too for a while. We’ve been married for 18 years now and we still keep our blinds open a little. Thank you for reminding me about how we got there.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Your description of "his" visuals we're great. I think I actually prefer leaving her body relatively un-described. That lets the reader full in their preferences. Awesome job!

CletisCletisalmost 10 years ago
time for another paint job?

I enjoyed the story. Seems it has been long enough that it might be time to repaint the bathroom. Maybe they can have someone over for a visit while they do it. Maybe he can set up cameras to video his neighbor and wife at the same time. Hopefully, if you do do a follow-up, I will find it and read it.

67spirit67spiritover 6 years ago
Totally hot!

Well written, with the basic picture described yet leaving much to the readers imagination. Reminded me of my own wife and I way back when we were in our 20's as well..

Good fun and great memories! Thank you!

rossedinspacerossedinspaceabout 2 months ago

Nice read. Thx. Desperately (sp?) needs a follow up.

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