by JagFarlane
Needs a touch of attention to detail. Might be a thought to contact someone here to act as an Editor.
I agree with pikerwolf - needs some editing. You've got the subject matter down but the mechanics need some work
I love curvy woman...married one, and she's experienced big cocks too.. Good writing. only wish there was some rimming...g/g and M/F....
God,what I wouldn't give to have 2 women like that with me for the weekend!!