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Click hereShe felt ice cold water hitting her skin and heard Lisa's voice behind her; "Stand still, the cold water will freshen you up."
Then she could feel the warm water being added, could feel Lisa's hands in her hair, on her face, on her body. She slowly opened her eyes and took in the smell of the shower gel and shampoo, then the conditioner. Then it was over and Lisa was showing her the mattress, inviting her to rest. She lay down and watched as Lisa slowly took off her trainers then her jeans, tee shirt and bra. But that was where it ended, Lisa was still wearing a thong, still protecting her virginity, still not absolutely sure of where she was going.
She lay beside Laura cuddling the older woman, running her hands over her body, nuzzling her face into her neck and gently kissing her on the cheek, then turning her round and kissing her lips. They kissed for a long time, their bodies entwined, silently devouring each other. Then Laura closed her eyes as she felt Lisa's fingers in her pussy, felt the teenagers exploring her womanhood; one finger, two fingers, three fingers, then her fist. She got used to the rhythm of the movement of the small hand in her pussy, of Lisa's tongue now inside her mouth - - - and as she finally came, two more long kisses on her neck - two more marks.
Laura smiled, had she ever felt as good as this
To be continued
The bad story line isn't the worse thing that happened here:-)it's the Crux of this whole literotica scheme. The writing is poor and from what view is the author writing from because he sure changes it often enough to mess things up..go back and rewrite it from one perspective or go the hell back to school before you write another sad story..This is the ONLY place your writing would ever be accepted and That givea you insight about this god awful place.
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Please do not continue...not this way. Theres a lot of bull in this story that needs to be cut out...a lot of detail into nothingness as if the author doesn't know where he's going yet wants to show off his use of words...the story is actually going no where...
Although many of the previous comments have some validity, it is clearly fantasy, and I look forward to the next part.