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Click hereShe felt ice cold water hitting her skin and heard Lisa's voice behind her; "Stand still, the cold water will freshen you up."
Then she could feel the warm water being added, could feel Lisa's hands in her hair, on her face, on her body. She slowly opened her eyes and took in the smell of the shower gel and shampoo, then the conditioner. Then it was over and Lisa was showing her the mattress, inviting her to rest. She lay down and watched as Lisa slowly took off her trainers then her jeans, tee shirt and bra. But that was where it ended, Lisa was still wearing a thong, still protecting her virginity, still not absolutely sure of where she was going.
She lay beside Laura cuddling the older woman, running her hands over her body, nuzzling her face into her neck and gently kissing her on the cheek, then turning her round and kissing her lips. They kissed for a long time, their bodies entwined, silently devouring each other. Then Laura closed her eyes as she felt Lisa's fingers in her pussy, felt the teenagers exploring her womanhood; one finger, two fingers, three fingers, then her fist. She got used to the rhythm of the movement of the small hand in her pussy, of Lisa's tongue now inside her mouth - - - and as she finally came, two more long kisses on her neck - two more marks.
Laura smiled, had she ever felt as good as this
To be continued
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 6 years agoThe bad story line isn't the worse thing that happened here:-)it's the Crux of this whole literotica scheme. The writing is poor and from what view is the author writing from because he sure changes it often enough to mess things up..go back and rewrite it from one perspective or go the hell back to school before you write another sad story..This is the ONLY place your writing would ever be accepted and That givea you insight about this god awful place.
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Anonymousalmost 6 years agoPlease do not continue...not this way. Theres a lot of bull in this story that needs to be cut out...a lot of detail into nothingness as if the author doesn't know where he's going yet wants to show off his use of words...the story is actually going no where...
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoAlthough many of the previous comments have some validity, it is clearly fantasy, and I look forward to the next part.
TornadoTysalmost 11 years agoI seems odd to me that a hot woman like Laura would be with a wimp of a man. Surely she would be a strong minded, gym toned, strong, ambitious man.
Why would a husband sent his wife to other men. He will end being humiliated by his wife and become a cuckold !
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoHis challenges would lead to him being a WACC and her having sex with others. Her one challenge that we know has her going off and having sex with some one else. At least they have the same idea, cut him out of any action, let him sit home and wank off to his anime. New twist on an idea for a story. But in the end it is still a cuckold story.
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoMaybe the husband places the cards that were selected in his pocket, and later in the story, after he has done some humiliating things in good faith, because "a deal is a deal", he is sitting at a bar, reflecting on what he has done, absent mindedly tapping the card on the bar, and the bartender comes up and asks what he is doing with a marked queen of hearts.
The fact that the card was the queen of hearts suggests that she picked it deliberately, and knew it would beat his card. When he finds out the game was rigged, he should get some form of revenge.
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoWho really cares about Lisa and these teenagers? Surely, the crux of the story is going to revolve around the things Laura does to humiliate her husband. Is it eventually going to come out that the cards were marked, and she cheated?
""Widen the fan a little" she asked, her eyes moving over the cards, backwards and forwards, backwards and forward. Then she made her choice...". Sounds like they were marked.
Steve surely would have insisted that she make her list more specific (at least, I know I would have). I think the story would have been more believeable if, after examining her list, he had said something like "Not sure what this stuff about 'a wood' means, so I'll reserve the right to refuse when the details become clear. Concerning 'assisting an arts group', I won't do nude modeling or anything that I find to be embarrassing. Concerning your 'weekend with a friend', if you intend to go with a male friend, or have any form of sex while away, forget it".
My only concern with this story is that Steve will probably turn into a total wimp, and probably a cuck (he probably already is a cuck, he just doesn't know it). The line "Then my cock went hard" is a bad sign for a story this this. It is very annoying when an author repeatedly has a wife abuse her husband, and instead of getting angry and assertive, he gets an erection and wimps out. Please don't make the husband a pathetic wimp. And if the wife abuses him in some manner, e.g., willfully humiliates him, and seems to enjoy twisting the knife, please include meaningful consequences, like the husband calling her a bitch and moving out.
Lickideesplitalmost 11 years agoIt looks VERY intriguing, so far! Lisa is a very confident young lady to be able to manage a mature tigress!
The couple sound like they enjoy testing each other much more than they do pleasuring each other! There is no doubt Sweetie is uber-adventurous!
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