All Comments on 'Cyberwhore'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Wonderfully written...

I do not normally read sci-fi erotic stories, and I have no idea why I picked this one, but I am so glad that I did. The clarity of the writing and the depth of the main character and what he goes through is amazing.

Cannot wait to try out some more of the author's work.

Sorry - I cannot remember my username! So, please replace Anonymous with Gilaine.

hazel_eyed_boyhazel_eyed_boyover 16 years ago
What the last guy said

I don't read the sci-fi stuff, but this one is excellent. I didn't get a rise out of it, mind you, but it was such a good story. My only real complaint is that the exchange with Sindy to try and learn more about her went on for two long. I was also kind of hoping that the protagonist would end up going mad and breaking her. Anyway, this was excellent. I'd love to see more of your writing, regardless of its genre.

XantuXantuover 16 years ago
Poor Sindy

Don't you just hate it when I guy just wants to talk... I feel like crashing is the only option. Fun read, sad and funny all at the same time. xantu

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