All Comments on 'Cycle of Selene'

That's just not my style. You're welcome to that, but I'm trying to make my characters as real as possible, then I get inside their minds. And that's what they're thinking of.

Plus, I want to foster things like respect, healthy sex, responsibility, etc.

Your story is excellent. There will be someone making negative comments on most all stores these days. Ignore them.

Lovely story with a charming, sheepish hero, but I'm confused about the moon. Good to see the moon during the day, but if it's full two weeks later it should have been new (or nearly) when they first met, surely?

Well spotted with Selene's name; did you notice any others?

As for the moon phases, I could argue, the action is a week each side of full moon. Or admit I didn't give it any thought.

I'm glad you like the story even so.

good start to what could become a nice sized series depending on where you take it. Don't worry about the Anom that said that bareback is the only way. Most normal people want the story to be realistic, which means like normal humans they have to think/ worry about safe sex and pregnancy.