All Comments on 'Cycle'
by Erich_Norden
- 8 Comments
PrincessErinabout 15 years agoA very well written story but definitely weird and disturbing. Fits well with the contest though. Good luck.
TE999about 15 years agoThis tale was both well written and commendably descriptive. It engenders sympathy for both characters making their eventual coupling and the birth of a new creature more poignant. Good luck in the contest.
KillerRomanceabout 15 years agoEnjoyed it even if I DID read it the second time around. The prospect of her giving birth to a potato-like thing still gets to me, though. -shudders- <3 L.
Erich_Nordenabout 15 years agoAuthorI actually did include acknowledgements in the notes when I submitted this, and was under the impression that they would appear publicly. My apologies. I will submit an edit shortly. :)
Jack_Samuelabout 15 years agoIts a very well written piece Erich and good luck in the contest. I think your descriptions and emotions are fantastic but i would have liked to see more from Moort
DevilOrAngelabout 15 years agoReally nicely done Erich :-) Liked the descriptions of the creature and the entire flow of the story :-) Good luck on the contest
