All Comments on 'Cynthia's Business Trips Ch. 02'

The answer is simple. When in doubt, doubt... Buy her a present. A Chasity Belt, put it on her and he has the only key....And inform her as she starts to leave... I love you with all my heart and soul. And I know how hard it is for you to give up those men. Which is why, I hired a detective agency that is extremely good at not being seen or noticeable to follow you... You'll never see them but they'll be watching you.. After all, Once burned twice shy... Then he kisses her... as she leaves...However. four paces away... she suddenly stops... turns around and goes back to him saying, I'm so sorry... and goes back home with him. Did he hire a detective agency... She'll never know... only he knows ( he didn't). The result. In her position in the Company, She no longer takes those sales trips... She ends up resigning and stays home with him... so when she now gets the urge for those big black cocks... His next present. a black life-like huge dildo.... which he uses on her.

OK, Rob had someone watching her; the PI, giving his gun to him, backed him up. But no afterwards. Nothing what happened to the guys when they went home, or to Rob (& his wife?) afterwards. Ohio's too rushed to finish the story.

To him saying he knows his wife loves him, there's something major wrong with him. No wife does what she does & loves the husband.

For making Rob a bit of a wimp & major idiot, & not completing this story, 1 star. Bob

"I know she really loves me," (paraphrasing) he said. Hubby needs to have his head examined. Any wife slutting around & fucking 4-7 men at a time when on a business trip does NOT love the husband. Especially when she supposedly realized how he felt from the pictures & promised not to do it again. He should've kicked her out much earlier. Short & sweet. 4 stars Bob

"The hell of it is, she really does love me." NO, she doesn't. She could not love him and betray him as she did. She only loves herself.

I give this story 5 stars . He was smart enough to hire the PI so that he would have a witness in case she took it to court . I just sent pictures of my wife and her boy friend to her Dad and step mom . I also showed them to her best friends husband . That worthless SOB laughed because he knew about it . I then showed him pictures of his wife in action with his friend . I laughed as I left his house . I also gave pictures to his wives Mom and Dad . I guess they did not care for Them ? go figure that one out

She lied in order to feed her own needs. Beyond that any other factors are valueless.

Divorce, and permanent NC, are the only appropriate options.

Once a cheater always a cheater is a VERY true statement - as there is no way for a cheater to turn back time and not cheat. The cheater's plea then is only "I won't do it again. I promise. Trust me."

But then it is a question of character, of having it. Virtue is doing the right thing, all the time, and every time - even when no one is watching. Those who do give "second chances" know the chances are slim for any cheater. They know her (or his) character already.

Why the fuck did the cuckold pussy hire a private detective. He already knew for a fact that the slut was getting gang banged on a regular basis. Is every male in Ohio secretly a closeted homo? I’m pretty sure that this authors greatest desire is to suck a black cock. It must really suck to be a closeted homo racist who dreams of getting fucked by black men. Probably a republican too.

This went way too far. Any man that wanted to be a man would have kicked her ass to the curb after the first time he found out what she was doing.

Needs an epilogue. It was to trite and dependable for the fifth star from me.

What man would put up with her even one time? Pure trash minus ten stars

Good story, but needs an ending,

He rehires his private detective after he knows her room number and calls on schedule but this time "Until" she's not answering... sure enough, She returns. nothing suspicious. But he suspects. after all, Addicts have an extremely hard time cleaning up. The detective is still on her case and reports that; "She's back to her black gang-bangs..." Once again, the detective sets her up with hidden camera's, etc in her hotel room... He follows her on her next out of town business trip... This time it's a two hour drive. Hangs out in the lobby... the detective meets with him... They wait, sure enough... It appears she's at it again... The detective and him go to her room... Having gained a room key from the desk having shown his driver's license, excuse to surprise his wife for her birthday or anniversary... they both enter the room... taking video and pics... As a couple of her men begin to approach, the detective pulls out his weapon... They back down, Collects their wallets. And before they leave the room he tells his wife... Big choice. 'I'm leaving going straight home... I expect you to do the same... If you're not home in Two an a half hours. Then I'll know we have no marriage and tomorrow I'm filing for divorce... the results are, Three of her lovers are married... the other's are single... the wives of those three get copies which results in three divorces... He drives home... gets himself a stiff drink when she walks through the front door... His next step... He obtains a Chasity device for her to wear, he has the only key. Knowing now that he's keeping tabs on her. She manages to finally forsake all others.

The truth is that it is very difficult to create a story with a decent plot when we find such idiotic characters. The plot inevitably turns idiotic. Are you able to be a bit objective and realize this?

A shame it is just hanging. We knew she couldn't make it - she's an addict. But answering the phone WHILST in coitus? Evil.

It's a tragedy and we do know what will happen. I just hope he gets his happy ending.

Ernie let an enraged husband borrow HIS weapon? I can believe the rest of the story but no way would a halfway sane man, much less a licensed PI let a pissed off husband "borrow" HIS gun!

Same old same old, but some commentators miss the point. The wife goes for black men because of the basic taboo that exists for so many white women, not just because the author is a racist arsehole, although that may also be true.

I wonder who gets to eat the creampie first, you or JPB?

Excellent follow up. It really needs more chapters,

Great story... appreciated by a fellow "buckeye"

JPB just wrote his story in order to totally piss off his white hetero male readers... I guess you just followed suit... you guys were probably quite successful by the looks of the super low ratings... must have been quite satisfying and rewarding for the both of you.

Me you have taken great lessons from jpb and left it unfinished great try though.

It's better than the original, but that is an extremely low bar to make it over.

AngelRider says it's not racist or juvenile when in fact it is both racist AND juvenile. Why is it always black men these wives cheat with? Is it more of a sin to commit adultery with a black man/men than with a white man/men? The obvious inference of this plot device is that black men are farther down the food chain than their white counterparts and therefore it's even more forbidden. This dreary, juvenile theme raises another pertinent question; why is she married to a white man in the first if it's only black men that turn her on?

Angle that's true what you said. But love is important too. I wouldn't want to have sex (make love) with someone that just respects me but doesn't love me.

Oh I will add, love is relative and ultimately meaningless. Without respect what does it matter if someone loves you. Love doesn't stop betrayal. Respect does. You cannot respect someone and betray that person so cruelly

Why? This added nothing. This was an entirely unnecessary entry. At least it wasn't racist or juvenile.. two adjectives that quite accurately describe Bob

Not much here.

3 stars

I’m pretty sure Ohio wants to suck a bbc.

What did he expect, she told him she's ALWAYS been a SLUT!

Also, why did he think she would ever change.

she just loves herself more.

This was a great continuation of Cindy’s Business Trips. Sure enough, Cindy could not stay faithful to her husband and Rob caught her fucking five black men in a hotel room. He took pictures of all five black men and Cindy. He will be divorcing Cindy when he gets back home. He does not want to hear any explanation from her as to why she cheated on him. Their marriage is over. Good job on the story. Five stars!!!!!

Wow, there are some pansy-ass writers on this site.

Oh please my wife goes away for BBC Gang bangs and he stays fucking married that's just beyond STUPID

should have divorced her long ago

More of a finish than JPB had to his story !

At least there was SOME sort of resolution !

A 4 for the repair work.

EastCoaster

Where is the beginning of this tale? Where is Chapter 01???

Better then the ridiculous part 1.

Quite a bit better outcome than JPB's!

Pathetic cuck story

Another no ending story

Well, Sweetie told him the truth about herself after he caught her before! She wasn’t lying!

5*

I liked it. I liked the ending, Fuck off bitch. I read one comment calling you a racist, Did I miss something?

Zero

Unfinished story, crap should be zero stars.

Bad authors write things like this: "So I guess you could say that it really was just my ego that was hurt. However, never underestimate how important a man's ego is to him." This is feminist nonsense and reflects a very shallow understanding of the significance of marriage, vindication of principle, and justice. The racist "negro" bullshit is also the writing of a third-rater. This is normally a good author, but this is worse than mediocre.

Very good. The story is complete as it is. No need for anything else.

Just because his wife cheats doesn't mean he does . Yes he took her back But Sadly I took My ex back also . We had a Daughter together and she swore she would never Cheat again . 3 Months later she was screwing around on Me again . That time I did not take her back

THE END READS LIKE JUST ANOTHER DIMP CUCK HUSBAND!

ANOTHER INCOMPLETE WASTE OF TIME STORY

Gross

If you don't like how a story ends, WRITE YOUR OWN! I enjoy a good tale by a good writer and won't second guess him/her. There are other writers and stories if you are unhappy. Personally, I enjoy JPB and ohio and it appears that I'm not alone.

somewhere east of Omaha

Damn. I really didn't know what to think about this story, I found it, then went to read JPB's first chapter and wasn't satisfied with the lack of ending on it. So was glad to come back here and read your ending. It has an ending, but I just feel bad for both of them. I guess I identify with the characters way too much.

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I don't know for sure what I would have done if it was me, but I'm pretty sure that I wouldn't have wanted to stay with her for the time he did with her continuing to see others when she was on her trips. But then who knows. But that would make for a really short story. So I like the way you did it. I'm sure that there are comments wanting to hear all about what happened afterward, her crying, him being resolute, her losing her job when he gets pissed at her for delaying the divorce and giving all the evidence of her activities to the Board of Directors, her becoming destitute and ending up in a whorehouse.

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But I like it the way it is. In my mind she'd devastated, but they split and that's that. With her keeping her job he doesn't have to pay 'Temporary Spousal Support'. Its an addiction with her so I assume she keeps doing it. Except probably not in Salt Lake anymore. Five thumbs up.

0 stars - stupid cuck/wimp crap

The aftermath is what is missing

Mr Ohio...I liked this part of urs better than the original... kindly finish the part ..so that there is no suspense left... everyone commenting here is not happy that u left the story open again

The JPB original was stupid, this just added insult to injury.

Right result,far too late.

wonder if in real life there are women who so love to be humiliated or dominated that they cheat. Instead of seeing if hubby could role plat well enuf to satisfy that sickness, I guess the embarrassment of telling your husband your sick, you go ahead cheat get foundout and divorced?

The original was one of the worst stories of all time. Other than the husband — the same guy who learned to live with it in the first part — suddenly going all “tough guy,” how’s this story any better? And how does it resolve anything?

What this ridiculous story needs is a little humor. Maybe “BBC Rehab.” I’d love to see some of the inpatients they have in there.

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So where is the end? You claimed you are trying to finish the story but you left it open again.

Besides your plot is rather foolish. A guy threatens people in a hotel with a gun? What do you think would happen if any of them calls security while he exits? He has already told them he is a husband and there is plenty of them to be witnesses against him.

This would end up rather poorly for him.

It amazes me how little thinking you BTB people use before you write silly plots.

Kind of a stupid premise to start with. Just never did take off. You’ve done better.

Sucked. No ending.

If love is Screwing 5 other guys then Yes She Loves him . I Never want Love like that

Ok so I liked the story but there still needs to be an ending. This was not an ending

What is this authorial fascination with black men. If I repeated here what black women have to say about black men, this comment would be deleted. This seems to be a fetish with many writers here.

Now:" So I guess you could say that it really was just my ego that was hurt. However, never underestimate how important a man's ego is to him"

Only a feminized male would write that. It's usual non-substantive approach feminists use to try to deflect substantive moral and other criticism of vicious or dysfunctional female behavior.

As for the comment below, the husband here was, as usual in LW, written as a weak, needy, cuckish cunt of a man who finally just decided to quit tolerating his wife cucking him. The story is revolting.

I loved it... NOT the cheating but that hubby didn't just roll over and do nothing ... he took the appropriate action and this no good worthless cheating slut bitch whore got exactly what she deserved !!

I liked the story. I am not sure why you made it a race thing. I find IR insulting to everyone involved, but that is just my opinion.

Not a bad story

Well written, thank you Ohio.

@sbrooks,

I knew you liked stories like this, so much so that you have read it 5 or 6 times.

You are like Capt. Obvious with your comments. You cuck lover.

"Cynthia's "business trips", which were really excuses to have gangbangs with black men" - Are they really just excuses?She IS a successful sales rep, isn't she?

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I would never go down on her or kiss her again. I'd fuck her as long as she had a clean bill of health.

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"I am sorry that it hurts you so much." - I wouldn't be sorry!

She's nothing but a slimy slut. Actually, if it would have happened in a private setting with no one around, waste all those POS.

She cheats on him forever and he takes her back .. And then he is Surprised that She is Cheating again ? What a Cluck

Ok. This is always the biggest fear a cheated spouse has. Will she/he relapse?

In this case, a prenup should have been in order, and she should have quit her job. Also, he needed to have her tell the true story, to the parents. Don’t ever discount, peer pressure in a woman’s life.

I realize that to some commenters this might seem extreme. But allowing her to continue going out of town unsupervised, is like getting a recovering alcoholic a job in a liquor store. Make it harder, for her to be alone with her triggers. If you don’t want to do that, divorce the bitch.

trash .

this story was trash in JPBs version and you didnt improve it .

the only way to save it is if she dies of aids .

This is an improved ending for the story ohio created. Cynthia burnt herself by NOT getting help for her "addiction". Rob's response was a fair and measured one.

Nicely done.

Goodbye CEO.

Thanks for the follow up even if it’s your style and not JPB. You could work the rest of your life to finish his since he’s so prolific a writer. I enjoyed having an end to the tale, especially one that’s well written, whether you like the ending or not.

Because he finally dumped the slut. Other then that, rubbish.

Finish with all getting herpes

jtwheels

I just don't get how someone can say she loves you and then go out and do what she did. Weird concept of love I guess.

He gave the pistol back to the owner (the private detective) downstairs in the lobby of the hotel. The guys were still in her room, probably with Sweetie airtight!

Nice finish, but Ohio is always good. He makes good follow-ups of stories by other authors ... keeps the main characters in character and provides a different but plausible finish.

5* still

Handed over the gun.

Seriously?

What fantastical bullshit.

The husband thinks His wife loves him ?? No Wife would show that Much disrespect to someone they Love .. I wonder if she got some STDs or Aids from them ?? I would not have taken her back .. There are a Lot of Sluts in this World and He is married to One

"The hell of it is, she really loves me. I know she does."

Husband is delusional! If his wife loved him she wouldn't fuck around on him doing gang bangs. She's just another entitled cunt.

She is mentally ill, he is better off without her. No doubt about it.

She will end up alone and disease ridden

Just a thought...Was Artie and Suzanne black? For some reason, that is how I pictured them

They all ask what is going to happen next! They must be US Republicans who can’t think for themselves, lol! They need The Donald to tell them what to do! The author clearly states at the end of this excellent story that Cynthia was thrown out of the house and he is divorcing her. The author also stated Cynthia didn’t want a divorce so this ending really hurts her!

Glad to see she gets caught...and by her husband...she sees him see her in the act... but again the author lets us readers down...we don't get to see what she goes through for getting caught...after all...her cheating is the story........

how about an ending?

I mean it REALLY REALLY SUCKS

Poor ending ,needs beefing up.What happened to Cynthia and what was the outcome of the wife's being told what their husbands were doing.

1 star, and I'd give it less if I could. He pretty much agrees to her gangbangs continuing, then reconciles?

I didn't think you could do it, but you managed to take a crap JPB story and make it even worse. WOW.

I have a Pistol in My Hands .. There are 5 guys screwing My Wife .. I could shoot them and go to Jail .. I could take their Wallets and Make sure that there families know .. I could also send Pictures to Her Coworkers and family .. I Like the last 2 as I do not go to Jail .. Now if they had been raping Her . That would be a different Story

For sure

He has NO self respect. He is a simp and a wimp. He will die alone because no woman will ever want to be with him. How can he make them feel protected and and safe when he allows his wife to be a alut and a whore.

He is worthless and useless.

I kind of like your ending better. No more is needed.

Shes a whore who wasnt satisfied with one man, he set himself up for more pain the wimp.

You gave it a damn good shot considering your source material but, as they say, you just can't polish a turd.

It's a fictional story pea brain. Proof...what a dumbass.

A fictional story is proof that every woman is a cheating slut? Just how badly did you get burned?