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by jjcole43

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Fucking

theif

loser

William smythWilliam smythover 10 years ago
Nicely told

There needs to be more stories about the pleasures of Father/Son sex.

Mom and son are not the only hot combination when it comes to incest.

his2pethis2petover 10 years ago
needs work

I liked to concept but you were very shy on the depth of character and details. Don't be afraid to put it all out there. If it's too long just break it up into chapters.

bcallinvbcallinvover 10 years ago
nice story

I agree there should be more stories about dad and son. Just as hot as mom and son

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
More description

In any of the "sex scenes" in this story, it's just like, "we fucked. The end" I'm not really ok with that. Be more descriptive next time, it would help out a lot.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
APPARENTLY.......

THIS STORY BELONGS IN TRANSVESTITE CATEGORY, NOT INCEST.

jfh55jfh55about 9 years ago
Hot story of dad and son

Very sexy story of a father and son finding love with each other . The father slowly allowing the love to grow until the son is ready and introducing the son to the other side of life. What a vacation !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
One problem......

I think it was Anti Climactic

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